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Outline and first 50 pages           

$150

Want some feedback on your novel-in-progress? I can provide a critique your outline and first fifty pages, so you can see if you're on track.


Query letter and first 10 pages     

$75

Are you ready to query? Let me help you polish that sample and query you send out into the world, so you can put your best foot forward.


Outline only                                   

$100

Need help with your plot? Send me your outline (up to ten pages) and I'll let you know if your story is off on the right track.


Full manuscript                             

$600

Want a full mentoring experience? I'll provide feedback (an editorial letter, just like you'd get from an editor) of your manuscript, up to 60k words, and we'll meet virtually up to an hour.


Interview with RMFW's 

Mark Stevens

Interview with MG Ninja

Spooky MG chat

Are you a writer in need of some professional feedback? In addition to being a mentor for organizations like SCBWI and providing conference critiques, I offer packaged feedback on manuscripts and queries.


I specialize in chapter books, middle-grade, YA and/or mysteries.

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