Are you a writer in need of some professional feedback? In addition to being a mentor for organizations like SCBWI and providing conference critiques, I offer packaged feedback on manuscripts and queries.

I specialize in chapter books, middle-grade, YA and/or mysteries.

For writers

Interview with MG Ninja

Spooky MG chat

Interview with RMFW's 

Mark Stevens


Outline and first 50 pages           


Want some feedback on your novel-in-progress? I can provide a critique your outline and first fifty pages, so you can see if you're on track.

Query letter and first 10 pages     


Are you ready to query? Let me help you polish that sample and query you send out into the world, so you can put your best foot forward.

Outline only                                   


Need help with your plot? Send me your outline (up to ten pages) and I'll let you know if your story is off on the right track.

Full manuscript                             


Want a full mentoring experience? I'll provide feedback (an editorial letter, just like you'd get from an editor) of your manuscript, up to 60k words, and we'll meet virtually up to an hour.

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